Sealed lips
My legs know no pain,
will walk beside her all through,
till the end of this world.
My hands know no rest,
they draw inspiration from her,
and keep poetizing her beauty.
My mind knows no state,
when awake, it keeps thinking her,
and dreams when otherwise.
My heart knows no depth,
it loves her with all sincerity,
from the bottom of it's heart.
My lips, oh no, know fear,
my love remains unexpressed,
will I ever be able to open up.
will walk beside her all through,
till the end of this world.
My hands know no rest,
they draw inspiration from her,
and keep poetizing her beauty.
My mind knows no state,
when awake, it keeps thinking her,
and dreams when otherwise.
My heart knows no depth,
it loves her with all sincerity,
from the bottom of it's heart.
My lips, oh no, know fear,
my love remains unexpressed,
will I ever be able to open up.
posted by Somu at 10:42 AM
15 Comments:
Nice lines ,Somu..
And I'm sure you'll be able to open up soon..
hey enna somu ore passionate posta erukku...climate efecta...
ahh nice i sense the next should be the fulfilled love poem?
When eyes talked, it was in the depths of the night
When my smiles spoke, it was in the mayhem of my lonliness
When my words told aloud, there was a deafening stillness around
When my gestures said, the mirror was the only audience
But When I said nothing at all, a muscle in someone's heart twitched a little
:-)
hey Somu K, Sooper poem da...
:-)
Smiles etc.,
Limsa
@Ganga
Thanks. Just to reiterate, this is something from the past... Whether I was able to open up or not is a "Million Dollar Question (MDQ)". You'd realize from my next post why MDQ is within quotes.
@Sophie
Nah nothing to do with the climate... for love to be unleashed, anytime is the best time :o)
@Visitra
The end is two post away. Ofcourse it was fulfilled... but then in what sense is to be waited and watched :O)
@Limsa
I really like the way you come out expressing your response through poetic lines. Hats off :o)
Sometimes, for a heart to twitch, saying nothing at all does not help. Coming out in the open makes more sense in specific cases :o)
Enna sollura?
Cheers,
Somu K
Somuuu!! na Diwali ki oorku poren tmrw :(
Sunday blogger meet aa!! :(
@Viji
Naa kooda intha meeta yengayaavathu L&T pakathula vekalaameynu suggest pannalaamnu irunthein ! No point ippo... :o))))
Hmmm somu.. read the chapter 1 as well.... good ones somu...keep going!!!
have a nice diwali...
"My lips, oh no, know fear,
my love remains unexpressed,
will I ever be able to open up."
love those lines!!! :)
Superb somu.!! I love it. I liked the climax in the last verse.!! What a nice way of telling this.!!
keep it up.! Congratulations.!!
Nice one!!!
//My lips, oh no, know fear,
my love remains unexpressed,
will I ever be able to open up.//
Liked this a lot!!!
Hey,
Great Poems. I too am an old Vana Vani student. Got to ur blog through "my Kirukkals..." I like poems a lot. The poem on Asin was great. I've opened 3 blogs. One for jokes,one for funny pics and one for my own scribblings. Check them out. And once again - ur poems are really good
open up... somu.. its time to do it...
Inniya Deepavalli nalvazhtukal ;)
@Krish
Thanks a lot. You have a wonderful Diwali at your native place :o)
@Kalai
Thanks. Those are my favorite lines too... That's the line which made me realize it's just not easy to bring to action all that we dream of :o)
@Narayanan
Thanks... Unga comment is making me fly on air... Romba thanks again :o)
@Art
Thanks... Looks like everyone seems to have liked this part.
@All in a day's work
Oh An alumini ? That's cool... Thanks for your comment and welcome here.
Will definitely check your blog in just a while :o)
@Ram
Correct. Yevalavu naalthaan manasu kullayey pootivekarathu :O)
@Visitra
THanks a lot... ungalukkum en inniya Deepavali nalvaazhthukal :o)
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