New found love
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She gave me a drop of tear,
you wiped it off my cheek.
She left me a shattered life,
you straightened it for me.
She gave me a troubled soul,
you put my self at ease.
She left me with burdened thoughts,
you put my mind at peace.
She gave me a broken heart,
you nursed it off it's ache.
She left me in dire pain,
you allayed it for my sake.
She gave me a bitter past,
you saved me from my blues.
She left me in dying spirits,
you gave me a life anew.
Disclaimer: All characters in this poem are completely fabricated by the author and they bear not even the slightest of resemblance to anyone or anything living or dead. Any such existence of a “SHE” or a “YOU” in real life is purely a coincidence.
posted by Somu at 12:14 PM
14 Comments:
The experiences given by "She" were so sad..But the deeds by "you" are so great..But "you"'s deeds are great only because of "She"..But ultimately the words written by you,Somu are the greatest...
Adada you vaazgha ;)
hey somu...whos...that you???
lets party of that YOU...Kva
:-) Kannu,
Unna aproma visarikkarein! ;-)
Smiles etc.,
Limsa
third love aa??? :)
Somu will not change :o)
@Sophie,Kalai,Limsa
Have put a disclaimer for your benefit ;o)))
@Ganga
Somehow I am not able to accept your words with humility :o))) However I should say that it serves as an amazing source of encouragement. Thanks a lot buddy.
@Limsa
There is absolutely nothing to enquire here :o))))
@Kalai
Once bitten, twice shy... So, there is no third time :o)
@Sonu
Right, how can i ever change ?
:) Dint know what to say.
nice poem.. but the picture was perhaps too much!!
hmmm sounds nice, i somehow feel like the SHE, dunno why though.
Cheers :-)
first time here.. nice kavidhai.. nicer disclaimer..
well she or you dont matter as long as the heart is mended.
nicely said!!
@Neels
No worries ! Ur silence speaks a 1000 words :o)
@Akshay
Never knew you were the poem liking types ! THanks... AS for the pic, I know it was a lil too much :o)
@Vidya
Thanks for dropping by. Maybe you shud trying being a "YOU" to someone... Am sure it wud sound nicer :o))
@Exlectic blogger
Welcome aboard and thanks for your kind words :o)
@Ashish
Am sure you know it better dude ! For now, for both of us, our love life is witu our cars, right ?
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