Wednesday, December 07, 2005

The Road Ahead...

My achievements, I try recalling.
The ones noteworthy,
the ones that made a difference,
the ones that changed a life,
the ones that moved a soul,
the ones that made my parents proud,
the ones that made me stand tall.
To my shock, my memory fails me.

As I retrace my path,
I try looking
for the flowers in their full bloom,
from the garden that I nurtured,
for the adherents following my footsteps,
for the mark that I have left behind,
for the memories that I have been part of,
for the soul that could distinguish me.
To my dismay, the search proves futile.
Barren is the entire trail,
bearing no inkling of my stride through it.

A startling revelation it was.
Now,lies with me the challenge,
of making my life memorable,
of making myself treasured,
that I remain etched in the minds of my posterity.
As I take up this trial,
I vow ,to make my journey,

a brilliant, unforgettable and a successful experience.

Picture Courtesy : EE.Columbia.edu

10 Comments:

Blogger sonal said...

just a smile, alright that's a grin :o)

6:43 AM, December 08, 2005  
Blogger NaiKutti said...

neatly written somu... and good luck for ur journey :-)

9:59 AM, December 08, 2005  
Blogger Ramya said...

Thanks for the b'day wish!! And may u enjoy every moment of your life!

10:28 AM, December 08, 2005  
Anonymous b a l a j i said...

Why suddenly philosophical????

By any chance did u see Bill Gates - Narayana murthy show on NDTV. May be this is an influence of that show

1:58 PM, December 08, 2005  
Blogger Gangadhar said...

Nice verse,as always...
and all the best,Somu!!
And the pic's so nice....Nice catch!!!

3:52 PM, December 08, 2005  
Blogger rsubras said...

somu, inspired by your poem :), of a motorist who was travelling to sholinganallur..he writes this poem after waiting for an hour near SRP Tools.. :)

My route, I try recalling.
The ones that were smooth,
the ones that picked acceleration,
the ones that were soft on my bike,
To my shock absorber, my memory fails me.

As i retrace my path,
I try looking for a road in a decent shape,
To my dismay, the search proves futile,
Barren is the entire trail,
bearing no inkling of a road, which was there few months ago.

A startling revelation it was,
Now lies with me the challenge
of making my journey safe,
of making my vehicle running,
that would not hurt the money in my pocket,
As i take up this trial,
I leave my vehicle in the MRTS station and take a bus.

4:06 PM, December 08, 2005  
Blogger Ramya said...

@RS: Too good!

8:24 PM, December 08, 2005  
Blogger Sheks said...

the road not taken!

9:56 PM, December 08, 2005  
Blogger Somu said...

That was a superb one Subra... Liked it a lot :o))

10:04 PM, December 09, 2005  
Blogger rsubras said...

hehe somu, i thought u wud get angry at me spoiling ur poem :) neway ur poem was very nice .........

10:34 PM, December 09, 2005  

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