Monday, January 09, 2006

A Night with "her"

End of a tiring day,
am lying in bed supine,
everything around frozen,
in mind her thoughts -
My heart flutters
and misses a beat -
Am moved even in this stillness.

Englufed in darkness,
in mind her smile -
A ray of sunshine,
the light of heaven -
A gleam even in this blackness.

Amidst utter silence,
in mind her voice -
Melifluous and sweet,
as that of a Robin -
A song even in this quietude.

My eye lids close,
chasing the elusive sleep,
my pursuit lost,
in mind her love -
her heart I win,
and her self surrenders -
A dream even in my awaken state.

I am left in my condition unchanged,
am still lying in bed,
motionless and calm,
fighting insomnia,
still day dreaming,
in mind the time -
The songbirds chirp,
to the crack of dawn -
The only change over the night.

11 Comments:

Blogger sophie said...

yepee...me first

1:50 PM, January 09, 2006  
Blogger sophie said...

was it y'day night somu???

My heart flutters
and misses a beat -reading this....

1:53 PM, January 09, 2006  
Blogger visithra said...

adada? ahem ahem ;)

3:40 PM, January 09, 2006  
Blogger Gangadhar said...

dat's fine..

5:05 PM, January 09, 2006  
Blogger Smyta said...

yo! kannu?????:-)

Smiles etc.,

Limsa

6:53 PM, January 09, 2006  
Blogger Filtered Sambhar said...

get hitched som's, high time ;)

8:36 PM, January 09, 2006  
Blogger Dreamvendor said...

Good one.
Liked the second para the most.

11:09 PM, January 09, 2006  
Blogger Vanathi said...

Wow...Good poem...

4:13 PM, January 10, 2006  
Anonymous Ravi said...

Interesting! When do we ALL get to meet this woman of your dreams? ;)

5:45 PM, January 10, 2006  
Blogger Sheks said...

ur recent blogs r full of double entendres.

5:46 PM, January 10, 2006  
Blogger Somu said...

@Sophie
Hello... Nothing to do with the other night... Don't get things mixed up ;o)

@Visithra
Enna adada ippo ? :o)

@Ganga
Dat's nice of you :o)

@Limsa
Yo yo ! ;o) Ippadi thaan appo appo surprises varum... Kandukaatha :o)

Cheers,
Somu K

@Bharath
Ha ha ! Maybe maybe not... But never short of inspirations for anything to do with Love ;o)

@Anna
Thanks a lot :o) Glad u liked it

Thanks @Vanathi

@Ravi
If you can get into my mind, and see the dreams the way I see, you can get to meet this woman too. But am sure u wudn't wanna be between me and my dream woman :o)

@Sheky
Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder...Btw I write nothing with double entendres (whats this word btw?)

8:48 PM, January 10, 2006  

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