Thursday, October 04, 2007

Just For You

Basking in beach, under moon's light,
on a wonderful, and magical night,
caressing your ears with Annie's Song,
I would fill up your senses all night long.

Holding your hands, walking the shore,
just your hold, wanting no more,
watching you prance, like waves in the sea,
I would fill up your senses so completely.

Rapt in your lap, lost in your smile,
dreaming us together, walking the aisle,
holding you tight, leading the dance,
I would fill up your senses at every chance.

Lighting a candle, savoring a meal,
sprinkling romance, unable to conceal,
playing a tune, strumming my six string,,
I would fill up your senses, like mountains in spring.

Note: "Fill up my senses" is a phrase that I lifted directly from John Denver's Annie's Song.

16 Comments:

Blogger b a l a j i said...

what a surprise!!!

I chumma checked out ur blog and seems u have a new post....

as usual.... indha kavidhayum enadhu sittrarivukku etta villai :(

6:48 PM, October 04, 2007  
Blogger Somu said...

Hey thanks Balaji... Guess I didn't have reasons to write so far...

Kavidhai etta veindiyavangalukku yetinale podhum ;)))

6:56 PM, October 04, 2007  
Blogger Sharmila Stephen said...

Somu nice poem .... :)

10:53 PM, October 04, 2007  
Blogger b a l a j i said...

adede...

neenga vera yaarukkaagavo kavidhai ezhudhineengalaa???

naana dhaan indecent-a adha padichittenaa??? ippadi thaan naan kevala pattu poradhu :(

11:18 PM, October 04, 2007  
Blogger Shiv said...

ahem ahem!!
nice poem dude!

12:00 AM, October 05, 2007  
Blogger Somu said...

Sharmi,

Thanks :)

Balaji,

Just kidding.

Shiv,

Thanks. Looks like your series post is shaping up well. Looking forward to more/

12:46 AM, October 05, 2007  
Blogger Erce said...

Under the basking light
of the moonlit night
In my ears where they belong
you softly whisper Anne's song

Fingers entwined,sand slipping through the toes
just being held so near, so close
Your eyes reflecting the depths of the sea
you fill up my senses so completely

Lost in your smile, held in your arms
sheltered,protected from every harm
Weightless, in a trance I dance
as you fill up my senses at every chance

Candle lit dinners and nights surreal
with the sprinkle of romance my heart you anneal
Our tune you play and strum your six string
You fill up my senses like mountains in spring

7:32 PM, October 09, 2007  
Blogger Art said...

hi.. hope to see more posts from u :)

2:54 AM, October 17, 2007  
Blogger ss said...

beautiful!! I loved it :o)

5:45 PM, October 17, 2007  
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12:52 PM, October 31, 2007  
Blogger Raj said...

terrific one mate.. keep going ... u rock

2:31 PM, November 01, 2007  
Blogger Marutham said...

Beautiful... :)
//I would fill up your senses, like mountains in spring.//
Totally Enjoyed ...

12:36 AM, December 05, 2007  
Blogger Marutham said...

Oops :D NO offence...
The rest of the poem is awesome too :D
DUMB ME! :)

PS: Just now saw ur INFO @ t chat box :)

10:55 PM, December 10, 2007  
Anonymous bati said...

good one as usual somu...

5:40 PM, January 24, 2008  
Blogger Büşra said...

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7:25 PM, September 15, 2008  
Anonymous su kaçağı said...

thanks..

8:41 PM, October 23, 2008  

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