Just For You
Basking in beach, under moon's light,
on a wonderful, and magical night,
caressing your ears with Annie's Song,
I would fill up your senses all night long.
Holding your hands, walking the shore,
just your hold, wanting no more,
watching you prance, like waves in the sea,
I would fill up your senses so completely.
Rapt in your lap, lost in your smile,
dreaming us together, walking the aisle,
holding you tight, leading the dance,
I would fill up your senses at every chance.
Lighting a candle, savoring a meal,
sprinkling romance, unable to conceal,
playing a tune, strumming my six string,,
I would fill up your senses, like mountains in spring.
Note: "Fill up my senses" is a phrase that I lifted directly from John Denver's Annie's Song.
on a wonderful, and magical night,
caressing your ears with Annie's Song,
I would fill up your senses all night long.
Holding your hands, walking the shore,
just your hold, wanting no more,
watching you prance, like waves in the sea,
I would fill up your senses so completely.
Rapt in your lap, lost in your smile,
dreaming us together, walking the aisle,
holding you tight, leading the dance,
I would fill up your senses at every chance.
Lighting a candle, savoring a meal,
sprinkling romance, unable to conceal,
playing a tune, strumming my six string,,
I would fill up your senses, like mountains in spring.
Note: "Fill up my senses" is a phrase that I lifted directly from John Denver's Annie's Song.


16 Comments:
what a surprise!!!
I chumma checked out ur blog and seems u have a new post....
as usual.... indha kavidhayum enadhu sittrarivukku etta villai :(
Hey thanks Balaji... Guess I didn't have reasons to write so far...
Kavidhai etta veindiyavangalukku yetinale podhum ;)))
Somu nice poem .... :)
adede...
neenga vera yaarukkaagavo kavidhai ezhudhineengalaa???
naana dhaan indecent-a adha padichittenaa??? ippadi thaan naan kevala pattu poradhu :(
ahem ahem!!
nice poem dude!
Sharmi,
Thanks :)
Balaji,
Just kidding.
Shiv,
Thanks. Looks like your series post is shaping up well. Looking forward to more/
Under the basking light
of the moonlit night
In my ears where they belong
you softly whisper Anne's song
Fingers entwined,sand slipping through the toes
just being held so near, so close
Your eyes reflecting the depths of the sea
you fill up my senses so completely
Lost in your smile, held in your arms
sheltered,protected from every harm
Weightless, in a trance I dance
as you fill up my senses at every chance
Candle lit dinners and nights surreal
with the sprinkle of romance my heart you anneal
Our tune you play and strum your six string
You fill up my senses like mountains in spring
hi.. hope to see more posts from u :)
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terrific one mate.. keep going ... u rock
Beautiful... :)
//I would fill up your senses, like mountains in spring.//
Totally Enjoyed ...
Oops :D NO offence...
The rest of the poem is awesome too :D
DUMB ME! :)
PS: Just now saw ur INFO @ t chat box :)
good one as usual somu...
thanks for sharing..
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thanks..
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