Just your smile would do
When my world is way behind,
And my day has not been kind,
Trust me, am telling you,
Just your smile would do.
When my life is only dry,
My work just makes me sigh,
Don’t wonder what to do,
Just your smile would do.
When I fall losing hope,
When I find it hard to cope,
Am not lying, it’s true,
Just your smile would do.
When I live with no drive,
And I feel dead, though alive,
Don’t try anything new,
Just your smile would do.
And my day has not been kind,
Trust me, am telling you,
Just your smile would do.
When my life is only dry,
My work just makes me sigh,
Don’t wonder what to do,
Just your smile would do.
When I fall losing hope,
When I find it hard to cope,
Am not lying, it’s true,
Just your smile would do.
When I live with no drive,
And I feel dead, though alive,
Don’t try anything new,
Just your smile would do.
posted by Somu at 3:33 PM
15 Comments:
gud to see u back,buddy..
Hey Ganga, Not sure if am back. But felt like writing this one :)
poetry is not my cup of tea....
you seem to be changing me.... :)
When I thought your blog went dormant
You came back with this post so fervent
Its nothing but the truth,
So much your posts could do !
I hope you see that smile sooner.
ur back! :)
@ Balaji,
That's the most flattering comment I have ever got., THanks.
@Ramya,
Miss.Somethings and nothings,
I thought something’s better than nothing.
Wondered if I had dissipated for good ?
Am glad it did what it could.
@Harish,
What's wrong with my back ? ;)
Am not sure if am back. But guess wil make some sporadic post :)
@M,
Sure.
wonder whose smile will do for me!!!! lol
But its kinda cool to be single!
And I believe not matter what, we both will never tend to lose our smile!! Cheers!
ohhhh somu.....whose smile are u talking about btw????thanx to the smiley babe whoz inspiring u.......
@Sonu,
Well being in Pune and still single ? I doubt that very much... :)
@Bati,
It's a friend's !!! U seem so engrossed in blogs... Why don't u start one on ur own ?
somu, poetry is nt my world too...but if people like u write such nice stuff, anybody will start loving it:)...like i'm LOVING it!!!(sounds like Mc Donald's right!!)
hey! I liked the poem so much I came back to read it lol!!!
Yeah am still single and happy :o) Enjoying myself in Pune.
u back...
tat puts a smile on my face...
somu..
full time poet-aa maaritteengaLaa?
just a smile will do
to make us walk miles and miles
to proof "just a smile will do.
just a smile will do
to make us write files and files of poem on a smile.
Aunty.G.
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