Missing you
Like the sands of Sahara, arid andMissing the monsoons,
Like the hours of darkness, murky and
Missing the crack of dawn,
Like a withering rose, wilting and
Missing a glance of sun’s beam,
Like the deprived lot, famished and
Missing a morsel of rice,
Like a desolate soul, abandoned and
Missing a devoted friend,
Like a dying man, downhearted and
Missing a miraculous cure,
Am here, forsaken and forlorn,
Missing you.
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16 Comments:
Sooperu machi....Good one som's....
Get sambharred!!!
Filtered by sambhar....
wow ...somu...u deserve a *** for this...
Wow Somu...beautiful..
Aha.. Romba miss panreenga...
Good one...
Somu K:
Sweet....
"Did I just see your image flutter by
Where once my love's nest used to lie
Everything sullen under the vast sky
Seems to cast their breath on a sigh"
Smiles etc.,
Limsa
Somu K;
Forgot to add..tell me about the MISSING Feeling!!
I am missing someone so badly that even my silence would refuse to be silent about the agony!
Smiles etc.,
Smyta
Somu..itz ok compared to the 4 liner you created at Smyta's blog. That was simbly superb! :)
Good One Somu or rather Mr.Wordsworth :)
@Sambhar
Thanks a lot machi :o))
@Sophie
That's so sweet...Thanks :o)
@Ganga
Thanks a lot :O))
@Krish
appo miss panninein... Time heals :o)
@Smyta
Wonderful lines... Looks like we can start a mutual inspiration group... What say ?
And yeah missing someone sure is a feeling I wudn't wanna go through. Silence refusing to be silent .. lol ! That's a nice one :o)
@Ravi
Quite obviously athu Smyta inspiration... Superathaan irrukum !
I read your comments there too... Romba thanks :o)
@JB
Now am flying on air... can you have someone bring me down.
Thanks a lot !
wow nice one
Thanks Visithra
nicely written, somu
yet another poem!
@Ram
Thanks a lot !!!
@Sheks
Yeah yet another poem. When my well of thoughts is dried up, I take water from my sea of archives :o))))
Very nice poem...Who is the lucky fellow...
Susubala,
I normally don't write such touching poems for fellows... Who is that lucky felli (if there is such a word) wud be a more apropriate question ;o)
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