Like the sands of Sahara, arid andMissing the monsoons,
Like the hours of darkness, murky and
Missing the crack of dawn,
Like a withering rose, wilting and
Missing a glance of sun’s beam,
Like the deprived lot, famished and
Missing a morsel of rice,
Like a desolate soul, abandoned and
Missing a devoted friend,
Like a dying man, downhearted and
Missing a miraculous cure,
Am here, forsaken and forlorn,
Missing you.
Pic courtesy
Sooperu machi....Good one som's....
ReplyDeleteGet sambharred!!!
Filtered by sambhar....
wow ...somu...u deserve a *** for this...
ReplyDeleteAha.. Romba miss panreenga...
ReplyDeleteGood one...
Somu..itz ok compared to the 4 liner you created at Smyta's blog. That was simbly superb! :)
ReplyDeleteGood One Somu or rather Mr.Wordsworth :)
ReplyDelete@Sambhar
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot machi :o))
@Sophie
That's so sweet...Thanks :o)
@Ganga
Thanks a lot :O))
@Krish
appo miss panninein... Time heals :o)
@Smyta
Wonderful lines... Looks like we can start a mutual inspiration group... What say ?
And yeah missing someone sure is a feeling I wudn't wanna go through. Silence refusing to be silent .. lol ! That's a nice one :o)
@Ravi
Quite obviously athu Smyta inspiration... Superathaan irrukum !
I read your comments there too... Romba thanks :o)
@JB
Now am flying on air... can you have someone bring me down.
Thanks a lot !
wow nice one
ReplyDeleteThanks Visithra
ReplyDeletenicely written, somu
ReplyDeleteyet another poem!
ReplyDelete@Ram
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot !!!
@Sheks
Yeah yet another poem. When my well of thoughts is dried up, I take water from my sea of archives :o))))
Susubala,
ReplyDeleteI normally don't write such touching poems for fellows... Who is that lucky felli (if there is such a word) wud be a more apropriate question ;o)
Direct - Dil se. Wondering for whom it was written.
ReplyDeleteJoy always,
Susan