Missing you

Like the sands of Sahara, arid and
Missing the monsoons,

Like the hours of darkness, murky and
Missing the crack of dawn,

Like a withering rose, wilting and
Missing a glance of sun’s beam,

Like the deprived lot, famished and
Missing a morsel of rice,

Like a desolate soul, abandoned and
Missing a devoted friend,

Like a dying man, downhearted and
Missing a miraculous cure,

Am here, forsaken and forlorn,
Missing you.


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13 comments:

  1. Sooperu machi....Good one som's....


    Get sambharred!!!
    Filtered by sambhar....

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  2. wow ...somu...u deserve a *** for this...

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  3. Aha.. Romba miss panreenga...
    Good one...

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  4. Somu..itz ok compared to the 4 liner you created at Smyta's blog. That was simbly superb! :)

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  5. Good One Somu or rather Mr.Wordsworth :)

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  6. @Sambhar
    Thanks a lot machi :o))

    @Sophie
    That's so sweet...Thanks :o)

    @Ganga
    Thanks a lot :O))

    @Krish
    appo miss panninein... Time heals :o)

    @Smyta
    Wonderful lines... Looks like we can start a mutual inspiration group... What say ?

    And yeah missing someone sure is a feeling I wudn't wanna go through. Silence refusing to be silent .. lol ! That's a nice one :o)

    @Ravi
    Quite obviously athu Smyta inspiration... Superathaan irrukum !

    I read your comments there too... Romba thanks :o)

    @JB
    Now am flying on air... can you have someone bring me down.
    Thanks a lot !

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  7. @Ram
    Thanks a lot !!!

    @Sheks
    Yeah yet another poem. When my well of thoughts is dried up, I take water from my sea of archives :o))))

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  8. Susubala,

    I normally don't write such touching poems for fellows... Who is that lucky felli (if there is such a word) wud be a more apropriate question ;o)

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  9. Direct - Dil se. Wondering for whom it was written.

    Joy always,
    Susan

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