Thursday, October 20, 2005

Missing you

Like the sands of Sahara, arid and
Missing the monsoons,

Like the hours of darkness, murky and
Missing the crack of dawn,

Like a withering rose, wilting and
Missing a glance of sun’s beam,

Like the deprived lot, famished and
Missing a morsel of rice,

Like a desolate soul, abandoned and
Missing a devoted friend,

Like a dying man, downhearted and
Missing a miraculous cure,

Am here, forsaken and forlorn,
Missing you.


Pic courtesy

16 Comments:

Blogger Filtered Sambhar said...

Sooperu machi....Good one som's....


Get sambharred!!!
Filtered by sambhar....

3:40 PM, October 20, 2005  
Blogger sophie said...

wow ...somu...u deserve a *** for this...

4:30 PM, October 20, 2005  
Blogger Gangadhar said...

Wow Somu...beautiful..

7:26 PM, October 20, 2005  
Blogger Krish said...

Aha.. Romba miss panreenga...
Good one...

7:55 PM, October 20, 2005  
Blogger Smyta said...

Somu K:

Sweet....

"Did I just see your image flutter by
Where once my love's nest used to lie
Everything sullen under the vast sky
Seems to cast their breath on a sigh"

Smiles etc.,

Limsa

8:06 PM, October 20, 2005  
Blogger Smyta said...

Somu K;

Forgot to add..tell me about the MISSING Feeling!!

I am missing someone so badly that even my silence would refuse to be silent about the agony!

Smiles etc.,

Smyta

8:07 PM, October 20, 2005  
Anonymous Ravi said...

Somu..itz ok compared to the 4 liner you created at Smyta's blog. That was simbly superb! :)

8:35 PM, October 20, 2005  
Blogger JB ! said...

Good One Somu or rather Mr.Wordsworth :)

9:51 AM, October 21, 2005  
Blogger Somu said...

@Sambhar
Thanks a lot machi :o))

@Sophie
That's so sweet...Thanks :o)

@Ganga
Thanks a lot :O))

@Krish
appo miss panninein... Time heals :o)

@Smyta
Wonderful lines... Looks like we can start a mutual inspiration group... What say ?

And yeah missing someone sure is a feeling I wudn't wanna go through. Silence refusing to be silent .. lol ! That's a nice one :o)

@Ravi
Quite obviously athu Smyta inspiration... Superathaan irrukum !

I read your comments there too... Romba thanks :o)

@JB
Now am flying on air... can you have someone bring me down.
Thanks a lot !

11:17 AM, October 21, 2005  
Blogger visithra said...

wow nice one

11:32 AM, October 21, 2005  
Blogger Somu said...

Thanks Visithra

11:44 AM, October 21, 2005  
Blogger Ram.C said...

nicely written, somu

5:33 AM, October 22, 2005  
Blogger Sheks said...

yet another poem!

4:12 PM, October 23, 2005  
Blogger Somu said...

@Ram
Thanks a lot !!!

@Sheks
Yeah yet another poem. When my well of thoughts is dried up, I take water from my sea of archives :o))))

11:54 AM, October 24, 2005  
Blogger susubala said...

Very nice poem...Who is the lucky fellow...

2:21 PM, November 02, 2005  
Blogger Somu said...

Susubala,

I normally don't write such touching poems for fellows... Who is that lucky felli (if there is such a word) wud be a more apropriate question ;o)

3:57 PM, November 02, 2005  

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