Without...
It is but natural for romance to follow romance !
Without your smile,
I would feel overcast.
Without your touch,
I would feel weak.
Without your kiss,
I would feel crestfallen.
Without your hug,
I would feel unwanted.
Without your presence,
I would feel lonely.
Without your friendship,
I would feel marooned.
Without your love,
I would feel lost.
Without you,
I would feel lifeless.
- SOM' '
Without 'U' even my name is incomplete,
How would I be any different?
Disclaimer : The disclaimer of the previous post holds good for this one too :o)
Without your smile,
I would feel overcast.
Without your touch,
I would feel weak.
Without your kiss,
I would feel crestfallen.
Without your hug,
I would feel unwanted.
Without your presence,
I would feel lonely.
Without your friendship,
I would feel marooned.
Without your love,
I would feel lost.
Without you,
I would feel lifeless.
- SOM' '
Without 'U' even my name is incomplete,
How would I be any different?
Disclaimer : The disclaimer of the previous post holds good for this one too :o)
posted by Somu at 7:11 AM
26 Comments:
Without "u" this word will also be incomplete
D-b-kk-
;-)
hahaah....
Somu......u are in the news....take a look at this post-
http://sambharmafia.blogspot.com/2005/11/chennais-thriving-blog-scene.html
the last three lines are too good, SOM
and another feather on your hat for featuring in NIP's article... good going.
@Balaji
Looks like you forgot "Por-kki" and "P-naak-"
@vishnu
Ivalavu urukama oru poem yezhudhina, ha ha va ? ;o)))
@Kaps
Thanks for the pointer... I did have a word with this guy from indian express yesterday during the meet... But never knew it was gonna be up so soon :o)))
@Ram
Thanks... I like those three lines too... guess anyone who has a "U" in his name can make use of it seamlessly :o))
And thanks... And as I had said, its such words of encouragement from ya folks that keep me going.
first congratulations for being featured in NIE,
aporam enna ora kadhal mazhaiya?
@Vatsan
Thanks machi ! Btw, why didnt ya turn up ? I was looking fwd to meet ya... I was left with no company till late in the evening for u know what !
Illa pa... Mazha penju onja effect intha poems !
I saw the snaps in Ganesh's blog....but he has not mentioned the names and hence couldn't relate to some of the folks.
I could make out Kiruba, PK, Chinmayi, Partha Krish etc. I didn't see u in the snaps.
Hi da somu!
Nice blog and nice poem indeed! I followed this newspaper article about you - http://www.newindpress.com/Newsitems.asp?ID=IE920051127111958&Title=Chennai&Topic=0
Great going da! I write romantic poetry too.. in both english and tamil, do take a look @ my poem, The Silhouette here - http://nakshatrams.blogspot.com
Thanks and keep writing,
Venky
vis2somu
//ivalavu urukama oru poem yezhudhina
>> appidiya!!!!!!!
;)
@kaps
Mez not there in any of those pics ! A price that u have to pay for dropping in late ! Maybe i shall post couple of pics taken from Sophie's cam (once she has them all uploaded) :o)
@Venky
THanks for dropping by Venky... and thanks for ur kind words !
I have booked marked ur URL... Will go through the same today and let u know :o) And u keep writing too !
Nice poem,Somu..Ending is so nice!!
And it's great to see your name published in Indian Express!!congrats..
congrats on the name mention ;)
ahha enna poem enna u ;) u is amazing illehya ;p
@Ganga
Thanks pal :o)
@Visithra
Thanks a lot !
So, in effect what you are saying is that "YOU" are amazing ? ;o)
somsu konjam over feelings ah irukku intha poem......... from "Reflections" age u are writing such over-peelings poem nu ninaikaren....(Remember "thanimaiyile inimai" or somekinda title similar to that ??) of course reasons vary with time......
without U my name is incomplete, ethanai peru ppa ippadi kilambirukeenga...prabhu's he-she padichathillae? appuram she ketpaanga..appadi paartha without S, M, S koodathan un name incomplete aaguthu avangallam yaaru nu....
feel pannunga...aana nyayama feel pannunga (Vadivelu style :p )
without U how would i spell sUcess
without U how would i trUst...
without U would spell sUccess wrongly and fail in the dictation test by UKG teacher
without U the following would be incomplete--rum and puff.
without U and inverted V even the roads to nilgiri hills would be incomplete
What? No disclaimer this time? ;)
Hmmm... This poem was quiet easy for me to understand.
Somu,
Had a really great time with u all.
That Dinner made things memorable..
SOMEONE SPECIAL? sounds fishy:D
@Subra
Romancena konjum exaggeration irukathaan seium ! Whatever written in reflections was more out of compulsion... When u are the lit sec, u need to make your contributions, right ? But ippo yelaam feel panni yezhuthurathu ! Ithula nyayam aniyaayam paaka koodaathu :o)
@Sophie
Way to go... Did you notice "Fail-re" and "distr-st" cannot be spelt without "U"
@Sheks
Super... One sentence one thousand meanings... Hats off :o)))
@Ravi
To avoid any misintepretations of the lines penned down, the disclaimer has been put in place ! Thanks for the reminder :o)
@Jaggy
Am glad you did !
And the feeling is mutual... I did have a wonderful time with u yesterday :o)
@Neels
So, what do u smell ? One day the fish would be out of its net... But be assured the disclaimer is true... If there is anything fishy, I wud ensure you get to know it much before many :o)
looks like a lot of people are jumping on board the 'without u' bandwagon..
when i think of 'without u' i think of u 2.. (esuze the pun)
@Akshay
Do Yo- think I sho-ld copyright the witho-t U technology ?
what im trying to say is U are amazing so is this U and so is that U ;p
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