Looking back at life can be quite a challenging feat, especially when you have already lived more than half of it. And to summarize it in just six words can only be close to impossible, when brevity is not in my nature. Now this post is being published as part of "CBC's six-word memoir tag" where I have to describe my life in just 6 words. Check out this post by Sowmya Swaminathan who is a journalist in the making to understand what this is all about. And CBC (Chennai Blogging Club) by the way is a group of fun loving bloggers from in and around Chennai.
When looking back, I come to realize there have been ups and downs, goods and bads, successes an failures, happiness and the otherwise, and I find it quite a task to be able to bundle the whole of it in a 6-word package. And so I thought, why look back, when I can look ahead and see how I want my life to be from this point on. I probably can learn from the past and script my future the way I want it to be. Given that, I cannot think of my life as being anything but a "brilliant, unforgettable, and a successful experience".
This is a poem I wrote 8 years ago when 6-word memoirs did not exist. But today, a one line excerpt from these lines have been used to fulfill the purpose of this tag :)
My achievements, I try recalling.
The ones noteworthy,
the ones that made a difference,
the ones that changed a life,
the ones that moved a soul,
the ones that made my parents proud,
the ones that made me stand tall.
To my shock, my memory fails me.
As I retrace my path,
I try looking
for the flowers in their full bloom,
from the garden that I nurtured,
for the adherents following my footsteps,
for the mark that I have left behind,
for the memories that I have been part of,
for the soul that could distinguish me.
To my dismay, the search proves futile.
Barren is the entire trail,
bearing no inkling of my stride through it.
A startling revelation it was.
Now,lies with me the challenge,
of making my life memorable,
of making myself treasured,
that I remain etched in the minds of my posterity.
As I take up this trial,
I vow ,to make my journey,
a brilliant, unforgettable and a successful experience.
Gomathi Shankar, it is now your turn... Go on. Let us know your life in Six Words.
~ Somu
My achievements, I try recalling.
The ones noteworthy,
the ones that made a difference,
the ones that changed a life,
the ones that moved a soul,
the ones that made my parents proud,
the ones that made me stand tall.
To my shock, my memory fails me.
As I retrace my path,
I try looking
for the flowers in their full bloom,
from the garden that I nurtured,
for the adherents following my footsteps,
for the mark that I have left behind,
for the memories that I have been part of,
for the soul that could distinguish me.
To my dismay, the search proves futile.
Barren is the entire trail,
bearing no inkling of my stride through it.
A startling revelation it was.
Now,lies with me the challenge,
of making my life memorable,
of making myself treasured,
that I remain etched in the minds of my posterity.
As I take up this trial,
I vow ,to make my journey,
a brilliant, unforgettable and a successful experience.
Gomathi Shankar, it is now your turn... Go on. Let us know your life in Six Words.
~ Somu
just a smile, alright that's a grin :o)
ReplyDeleteneatly written somu... and good luck for ur journey :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the b'day wish!! And may u enjoy every moment of your life!
ReplyDeleteWhy suddenly philosophical????
ReplyDeleteBy any chance did u see Bill Gates - Narayana murthy show on NDTV. May be this is an influence of that show
somu, inspired by your poem :), of a motorist who was travelling to sholinganallur..he writes this poem after waiting for an hour near SRP Tools.. :)
ReplyDeleteMy route, I try recalling.
The ones that were smooth,
the ones that picked acceleration,
the ones that were soft on my bike,
To my shock absorber, my memory fails me.
As i retrace my path,
I try looking for a road in a decent shape,
To my dismay, the search proves futile,
Barren is the entire trail,
bearing no inkling of a road, which was there few months ago.
A startling revelation it was,
Now lies with me the challenge
of making my journey safe,
of making my vehicle running,
that would not hurt the money in my pocket,
As i take up this trial,
I leave my vehicle in the MRTS station and take a bus.
@RS: Too good!
ReplyDeletethe road not taken!
ReplyDeleteThat was a superb one Subra... Liked it a lot :o))
ReplyDeletehehe somu, i thought u wud get angry at me spoiling ur poem :) neway ur poem was very nice .........
ReplyDelete:) great post. Loved the poem. And yes, life is an experience, is it not! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Deepa. And true... Quite an experience it is. And the variety that it comes with sure helps spice up the experience :)
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ReplyDeleteJourneys are always interesting and if the journey is brilliant and successful, nothing like it. Bravo.
ReplyDeleteJoy always,
Susan
'Success' is a very relative term. But 'Brilliant' and 'Unforgettable' are lively adjectives :)
ReplyDeleteDestination Infinity