Thursday, September 15, 2005

Pony Tale !

** Based on a true story **

As he was walking through the crisscrossing aisles towards the exit he cast his eyes on her. Standing nearly about 25 feet from him, she was making tiny movements that caught his attention. Its not so often that women end up staying back till 10.00 PM at work which aroused his curiosity.

Under the dim lights, only her silhouette was perceptible, and he had already lost his heart to her long and wavy hair. She was tying her hair into a ponytail and was on her mobile which was conspicuous from her actions.

He managed a smile. The usual before-leaving-home face wash and grooming are going to come in handy for the first time, he thought. “Hi, What’s you up to at this time?”, “Long day eh?”… and many such monologues flashed past his mind. As he approached her taking a detour from his usual path, he was not sure which one of those he would unleash to start a conversation.

He started closing in on her. His heart was racing. And just when he was within earshot distance, he realized the longhaired, pony tailed stud was talking to his girl friend on the mobile.

Our man manages a “Good night dude” and walks off silently like nothing had happened.

20 Comments:

Blogger Akruti said...

Hahahahahaha,Somu,that was one real fun exp:D Now,u say "Based on a true story" so tell me who is this "Our man" was it u,wait u,was it u? Bolo,bolo

1:46 AM, September 15, 2005  
Blogger Marc said...

Hilarious!Happened to me once b4..but realized it from a distance!

3:18 AM, September 15, 2005  
Blogger Smyta said...

Hahahahahaha :-))

Somu K...Hmm:p

yaaru adhu-Our Man..Konjam nammakum sollaradhudhaane:-)

Smiles etc.,

Limsa

3:38 AM, September 15, 2005  
Blogger Ram.C said...

LOL.. a good twist at the end.

4:18 AM, September 15, 2005  
Blogger silverine said...

Kahani mein twist???? lol Good one.

8:40 AM, September 15, 2005  
Blogger Krish said...

haha... great escape huh...

have fun som...

10:56 AM, September 15, 2005  
Blogger Somu said...

@Neels
"Based on a true story" is in most cases story about me and my experiences. There was just one instance where the story was as I heard from a friend. Unless otherwise specified, the protagonist in my true stories are always MR.ME AND MYSELF ;o)))


@Marc,
Ha ha ! Join the gang ! Dim lights are so deceiving...

@Limsa,
That happened to me just about 2 hrs before I wrote it ! So, you can imagine who our man is ;o)))

@Ram,
Yeah it was really a twist in the tale ! Finally the pony turned out to be just phoney. So sad !

@Silverine,
Thanks ! And haan Kahani mein twist !! Glad you liked it. But it's not something I wud like happening to me again ;o)

@Krish,
Great escape ? Hmmm yeah...

And yeah there's gonna be lot of fun !!! Btw, what's been happening after your visit to Thiruchengodu ? Keep us posted dude !

11:37 AM, September 15, 2005  
Blogger vee-jay said...

That was a good one!!

11:48 AM, September 15, 2005  
Blogger khandu said...

haha. that was a good escape.

12:01 PM, September 15, 2005  
Blogger Somu said...

@Vee-jay
First things first. Thanks for dropping by and taking the time to pen down your feedback.

And thanks again. Glad ya liked it ;o)

@Kabdhu
Yeah am a great escapist ;o)

1:04 PM, September 15, 2005  
Blogger Art said...

That was quite funny...
So sad u missed a chance.. i am just imagining what if u hadnt realized that it was guy until u spoke...

7:13 PM, September 15, 2005  
Blogger dfg said...

hi
i can imagine that man....wowwwwww
is that ur own experience......
Nicely written man...
Prakash

8:14 PM, September 15, 2005  
Blogger Gangadhar said...

Lol...
It's so sad that he got the wrong person..

8:32 PM, September 15, 2005  
Blogger Harish said...

tempted to ask "avana neeyi" :D

good one!

10:23 PM, September 15, 2005  
Blogger Somu said...

@Art
Lol ! Nothing would have happened had I not realized... The questions in my mind were anyways not gender specific...

@Prakash
Yes Prakash. That was my own ;o)

@Ganga
Sad is an underestimation :p

@Harish
Avaney thaan naan !

11:25 AM, September 16, 2005  
Blogger Swapna said...

Haha...
"Lost his heart to the long and wavy hair" :))
Nice one...
I can understand your pain...:)

11:38 AM, September 16, 2005  
Blogger Somu said...

@Soap
Thanks for understanding. Btw, there was no pain. Just plain disappointment ;o)))))

12:42 PM, September 16, 2005  
Blogger JB ! said...

Somu,
The 'Pony Tale' was quite hilarious..:) ! Try again dude ! ;)..next time let it be a 'straight' try :)

- Jb

4:39 PM, September 16, 2005  
Blogger Somu said...

@JB
What's all this ? Ofcourse it was a straigh try... Just got deceived by the dim lights... Am not the types to have a GAY and happy time... ;o))))))

11:18 PM, September 16, 2005  
Blogger Erce said...

Well if in some deep corner of yer heart, remotely interested....I could arrange the papers for you in Canada...its kinda illegal in india as of now......you knw, I support ur rights and all that...gonna be a lawyer, wud definitely help to work on such a case....Do lemme knw if u pursue ur interest ;)

11:37 PM, October 09, 2007  

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