Pony Tale !

** Based on a true story **

As he was walking through the crisscrossing aisles towards the exit he cast his eyes on her. Standing nearly about 25 feet from him, she was making tiny movements that caught his attention. Its not so often that women end up staying back till 10.00 PM at work which aroused his curiosity.

Under the dim lights, only her silhouette was perceptible, and he had already lost his heart to her long and wavy hair. She was tying her hair into a ponytail and was on her mobile which was conspicuous from her actions.

He managed a smile. The usual before-leaving-home face wash and grooming are going to come in handy for the first time, he thought. “Hi, What’s you up to at this time?”, “Long day eh?”… and many such monologues flashed past his mind. As he approached her taking a detour from his usual path, he was not sure which one of those he would unleash to start a conversation.

He started closing in on her. His heart was racing. And just when he was within earshot distance, he realized the longhaired, pony tailed stud was talking to his girl friend on the mobile.

Our man manages a “Good night dude” and walks off silently like nothing had happened.

16 comments:

  1. Hahahahahaha,Somu,that was one real fun exp:D Now,u say "Based on a true story" so tell me who is this "Our man" was it u,wait u,was it u? Bolo,bolo

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  2. Hilarious!Happened to me once b4..but realized it from a distance!

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  3. LOL.. a good twist at the end.

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  4. Kahani mein twist???? lol Good one.

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  5. haha... great escape huh...

    have fun som...

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  6. @Neels
    "Based on a true story" is in most cases story about me and my experiences. There was just one instance where the story was as I heard from a friend. Unless otherwise specified, the protagonist in my true stories are always MR.ME AND MYSELF ;o)))


    @Marc,
    Ha ha ! Join the gang ! Dim lights are so deceiving...

    @Limsa,
    That happened to me just about 2 hrs before I wrote it ! So, you can imagine who our man is ;o)))

    @Ram,
    Yeah it was really a twist in the tale ! Finally the pony turned out to be just phoney. So sad !

    @Silverine,
    Thanks ! And haan Kahani mein twist !! Glad you liked it. But it's not something I wud like happening to me again ;o)

    @Krish,
    Great escape ? Hmmm yeah...

    And yeah there's gonna be lot of fun !!! Btw, what's been happening after your visit to Thiruchengodu ? Keep us posted dude !

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  7. @Vee-jay
    First things first. Thanks for dropping by and taking the time to pen down your feedback.

    And thanks again. Glad ya liked it ;o)

    @Kabdhu
    Yeah am a great escapist ;o)

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  8. That was quite funny...
    So sad u missed a chance.. i am just imagining what if u hadnt realized that it was guy until u spoke...

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  9. hi
    i can imagine that man....wowwwwww
    is that ur own experience......
    Nicely written man...
    Prakash

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  10. tempted to ask "avana neeyi" :D

    good one!

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  11. @Art
    Lol ! Nothing would have happened had I not realized... The questions in my mind were anyways not gender specific...

    @Prakash
    Yes Prakash. That was my own ;o)

    @Ganga
    Sad is an underestimation :p

    @Harish
    Avaney thaan naan !

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  12. @Soap
    Thanks for understanding. Btw, there was no pain. Just plain disappointment ;o)))))

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  13. Somu,
    The 'Pony Tale' was quite hilarious..:) ! Try again dude ! ;)..next time let it be a 'straight' try :)

    - Jb

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  14. @JB
    What's all this ? Ofcourse it was a straigh try... Just got deceived by the dim lights... Am not the types to have a GAY and happy time... ;o))))))

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  15. Well if in some deep corner of yer heart, remotely interested....I could arrange the papers for you in Canada...its kinda illegal in india as of now......you knw, I support ur rights and all that...gonna be a lawyer, wud definitely help to work on such a case....Do lemme knw if u pursue ur interest ;)

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